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Monday, March 6, 2017

Port Hills Fire

Port Hills Fire

This past two weeks we have been writing about the port hills. This is my story about the fire.


When the Port Hills were on fire I was at home listening to mum and dad talking about the fire. My mum said, “did you hear about the port hills there on fire? ”. He replied “no I was at work”. Then mum said “enjoy your coffee”.

The next day at school I was playing soccer on the field, staring at the smoke above my head.  As I scored a goal the fire looked like it had spread a mile across the sky. When we went inside the fire spread even more. I started to get worried because my Dad works right next to the port hills. We heard a BOOM!!!! Across the sky and we got even more worried.

After that day victoria park was on fire I was at Blake and Bryce's house right next to the fire. We started staring out their window, while there was heaps of traffic. We started to worry a bit because it could of caught fire on their bushes. We quickly went outside to grab Dre there dog and then we went inside with him. As the inferno quickly spread across the port hills.

I felt very worried and sorry for the people that lost there home. I also felt sorry for the people that got injured. I felt the most worried for my Dad and Blake and Bryce. But now the fire is out. It got put out on thursday the 16 of february 2017.

This is a picture of the fire.













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2 comments:

  1. Hi Hunter it's Connor wow hunter it's a good job for writing

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  2. hi hunter my name is hunter im from waima school i like your writing keep up the good work

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