Thursday, November 10, 2016

The Monster And The Goey Marshmalow

This few weeks we have been learning about language features like onomatopoeia puns and metaphors. Also we seen a video about a monster and a boy with marshmallows. The work that my buddy Caleb have done are right below.

The monster And The
Gooey Marshmallows

It was a calm night, it was also in the middle of the rainforest and it was as cold as antarctica.
The monster craved marshmallows but could not find any. But suddenly !!! He jumped out of the water and gave a boy named Francis the shivers!!!

There was a little boy named Francis, he loved exploring around the outside forest.
He was alone and he stumbled across a monster and it gave him the puppy eyes. He tried to defend himself with a marshmallow on a stick. The boy gave the monster a few more marshmallows.

Then he ran out of marshmallows because he had his cold hand in the  bag of yummy marshmallows,he screamed arrr where are the marshmallow and the monster got angry and roared as loud as a dinosaur . Next the boy tried to defend himself with a pillow.The 8 thought it was a marshmallow the monster be came happy and thort it was a marshmallow.  

Soo then the monster got a stick and tried to cook it like sausages!!!
But then he realized that it wasn't a marshmallow because it burnt into ashes. Then the boy ran as fast as a cheater into the forest screaming!!!AAAAAAAAAA RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!

He ran straight to his warm parents and was telling them all about and the next week later they had a curse because they went back into the cold scary

I hope you enjoyed our story and found it interesting. I'll see ya in my next post.

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